01-03-2021, 01:15 PM
In the interest of shoring up "weird" details or plot holes:
The DNA evidence of Enrique's long-lost sister.
She was part of a major rescue mission north of the border; Texas, Arizona, California, whatever.
As with all foreign nationals, upon being found on US soil [without valid reason or ID] they get "bag'd & tag'd"
before being deported.
That's how her prints/DNA came to be in the system. Before going down to deal with Sanchez, Alex Morra
[with his black-ops connections] did his due diligence by finding ANY leverage possible to use against the
trafficker. [He put the paperwork in the glove compartment and only Delia knew it was there.] Only one real
blip showed on the radar: Isabella. She didn't get a name in the story itself because... reasons? lol
I had it, I just didn't put it in there. [Bad judgement call? Up too late? FML?] lol
But yeah, that's the idea-flow behind that particular part of the story. In case anyone thought "WTF?" ; )
I like to leave as much to the reader's imagination as I can but I don't like to leave empty pockets
of confusion or loose ends. A story's conflict should only ever reside within its characters, not in the
telling of the story itself. Says the constantly-painting-himself-into-a-corner guy. Hahaha.
The DNA evidence of Enrique's long-lost sister.
She was part of a major rescue mission north of the border; Texas, Arizona, California, whatever.
As with all foreign nationals, upon being found on US soil [without valid reason or ID] they get "bag'd & tag'd"
before being deported.
That's how her prints/DNA came to be in the system. Before going down to deal with Sanchez, Alex Morra
[with his black-ops connections] did his due diligence by finding ANY leverage possible to use against the
trafficker. [He put the paperwork in the glove compartment and only Delia knew it was there.] Only one real
blip showed on the radar: Isabella. She didn't get a name in the story itself because... reasons? lol
I had it, I just didn't put it in there. [Bad judgement call? Up too late? FML?] lol
But yeah, that's the idea-flow behind that particular part of the story. In case anyone thought "WTF?" ; )
I like to leave as much to the reader's imagination as I can but I don't like to leave empty pockets
of confusion or loose ends. A story's conflict should only ever reside within its characters, not in the
telling of the story itself. Says the constantly-painting-himself-into-a-corner guy. Hahaha.
